This is turning out to be really awesome. I can't believe I haven't commented yet.
I really like your style, and this story is so great because of the lighthearted feel. You can see it in how you seem to have so much fun with all the little sketches in the background, and in how the characters look and react.
One of my favorite shots is the panel in the bottom right on page 9- I love how her leg looks pressing into the other woman.
This is an excellent contribution, ryohji, and I hope it gets put in the notable contributions section when it is done.
Great work!
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