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Originally Posted by Vengeance1701
Your art is coming along but two things.
1) What's with the bunny ears?
and
2) I really hope I don't sound mean in asking this but: is English your first language? Your post indicates a decent amount of fluency but the comic loses something in the grammar. It sounds a little stilted, like you took out joining words.
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1.) Bunny Girl
2.)English is my main language but thats what happens when someone fails English through out middle and high school. I can't write worth shit to be honest.
::EDIT::
I saw my first typo. In the first page 4th panel I wrote "The B.E. Ray Is Should Double The Size Of My Boobs". I was original going to say "The B.E. Ray Is Going To Double The Size Of My Boobs" so you see how bad it was going to be.
::EDIT2:: I fixed that typo ^^;