I see some key areas you need to work on, Maggie.
1) Torso: The bulk of all transformation is in the torso. Clean lines creates a smooth transition.
2) Jaw: Rounding out the jaw means shortcutting the time to detail.
3) Shoulders: The shoulders look a little deformed. They are what need to be rounded out more, maybe even broadened.
Keep an eye on detail, and you don't have to work quite as hard as you think you might.
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