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Unread 07-11-2007   #5
Banana_of_Doom
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I know I'm not much of an artist, but I do see a couple spots that need work.

Her right leg, I know you were trying for perspective, but it just doesn't work out, and looks like her lower leg is really short.

She needs a bit more visible shoulder on the left side.

Her right arm, it's pretty hard to get your arm behind your back like that. =)

Her lower left leg, it's a little too bendy towards the bottom.

Her face is a bit broad, maybe needs a bit more definition on the away cheek.

The hands are done nice, as are the boobehs. Not too bad, just need some more practice, just like me.
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