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Originally Posted by ~Circe~
Second person is tricky though. It's just first person addressing the reader. I usually use it in first person past-tense... telling the story to the reader. Care to elaborate on why that is a bad thing? I would find it enormously helpful and illuminating.
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"Your hand stretches into a paw. Your bones shift into a new shape."
That's 2nd person TF, the narrator is telling the reader that
they are transforming. I've never liked it, and when I see the story starting out like that I Just immediately close the page and find something else to read. Not everyone with a TF fetish wants to
be the subject of the TF themselves.