Re: Laundry Day - Shrink Fan Comics
Not sure what to say with this one.
The story progresses smoothly. It is nice to actually watch her shrink. And the size comparisons are good. I do like the beginning when we see her in her bra and panties.
I do have some problems with it. It does end abruptly. The lesbian angle seems contrived. There are two inconsistencies in the art. First, her panties go from a bikini style to a G-string. Second, when she sees she has gotten smaller she looks to big.
I think it should have shown more of the emotional aftermath at the end. With a more realistic comfort scene. It would be nice if they found the underwear she had on shrank as well.
Over all I think it is average.
P.S.
Not sure if I will continue giving my opinion on these comics in the future.
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