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Unread 09-03-2018   #4
Tiedefender
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Re: Laundry Day - Shrink Fan Comics

Not sure what to say with this one.

The story progresses smoothly. It is nice to actually watch her shrink. And the size comparisons are good. I do like the beginning when we see her in her bra and panties.

I do have some problems with it. It does end abruptly. The lesbian angle seems contrived. There are two inconsistencies in the art. First, her panties go from a bikini style to a G-string. Second, when she sees she has gotten smaller she looks to big.

I think it should have shown more of the emotional aftermath at the end. With a more realistic comfort scene. It would be nice if they found the underwear she had on shrank as well.

Over all I think it is average.


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Not sure if I will continue giving my opinion on these comics in the future.
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