Re: Laundry Day - Shrink Fan Comics
It wasn't bad, but we've seen this "girl shrinks for x reason then she has sex" various times already (better night, bully, dream a little dream, shrink-o-vision ecc.); getting to the point is obviously good but it would be nice to see more stories that develops the causes and/or consequences of the shrinking ("a little competition" was my personal favourite in this reguard).
It would be nice even just some variety in the scenarios, sun surf shrunk manages to do that just by adding multiple girls for example.
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