Major issues with this.
Spoilers.
The art is fine, but the story gives me the creeps.
One of the issues mentioned in
http://www.process-productions.com/f...ad.php?t=50429 was a large lack of Lesbian focused stories with qzar9999 promising that "there is another part of laundry day on the way, so there's that" And this is not lesbian focused.
This is rape.
This is a bisexual individual forcing their way onto someone not attracted to the situation and continues to tell the larger person this over and over, we even get thought dialog where they clearly state they don't want to enjoy this. (meaning that their body is getting aroused from the action, not from emotionally enjoying the situation.)
This is hurtful to people who don't want their sexuality used as a crutch for a rape power fantasy.
I mentioned in the earlier thread that I would like a: (A "slice of life" casual shrink story of a cute lesbian couple would be to die for.
I'm so very tired of SW stories where the one shrinking is "fearing for their life" over some thing that would make them think they are in danger.
It's always "Oh no, I'm shrinking forever." Or "I'm at the mercy of a cruel master!" Or the ever popular "I'm going to be eaten, stepped on, crushed and have to run for my life!")
This is part of the problem. I understand that these stories aren't centered for me, as they are a large thing for everyone to have a bit to enjoy, but ultimately this felt wrong to read the whole way through and one of the tags needs to be: "Warning, Rape".
This isn't even "Lesbian" as the characters involved are a bisexual, a straight woman forced against her will, and an undetermined man seen near the end.
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.p...FemaleOnFemale