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Unread 10-04-2022   #12
Tiedefender
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Re: One Little Marble - Shrink Fan Comics

Finally was able to read it. The short answer is it's just okay. I wasn't expecting anything new but a lot of the story beats seem contrived. Other than that I'm not left with any strong feelings about it.

I did like the beginning part with the two ladies interacting with one another. That was the strongest part of the story in my opinion.

The art was good for the most part. Though there is some size discrepancies.
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