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Unread 07-26-2018   #7
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Re: Style Mistakes that Weaken TF stories

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Originally Posted by TF-Viewer View Post
TFs written in 2nd person, for starters.
Second person is tricky though. It's just first person addressing the reader. I usually use it in first person past-tense... telling the story to the reader. Care to elaborate on why that is a bad thing? I would find it enormously helpful and illuminating.
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