I don't think so, I think that may have been a little uncalled for. If you're wondering what to write in such a transformation piece, what find helps for me is to imagine the process in your mind and then detail it for your audience, relay to them just what's going down. It's hard for me to put into words what I do, really. It's not exactly Jessica Rabbit, but if you maybe want a guideline / example to show what I'm talking about, maybe take a look at my toon TG caption here
https://melkorios.deviantart.com/art...-Fun-724057883