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TanukiCannon · 06-04-2008

In an epic battle against good and evil <<generally a poor sentence
How will she end her adventure (Question mark?)

Hello Starfire, glad YOU'RE awake.

I(apostrophe)m going to make you eat (a) massive amount of food
(OR massive amountS of food).

Who are you (comma) unknown man (<Was that really necessary?)

Starfire's skin, the background and her eye colour is different in every panel on this page. So is the background.
Image compression quality is terrible.

I don't feel I need to continue.

06-04-2008	#19
TanukiCannon Lurker Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 19	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG In an epic battle against good and evil <<generally a poor sentence How will she end her adventure (Question mark?) Hello Starfire, glad YOU'RE awake. I(apostrophe)m going to make you eat (a) massive amount of food (OR massive amountS of food). Who are you (comma) unknown man (<Was that really necessary?) Starfire's skin, the background and her eye colour is different in every panel on this page. So is the background. Image compression quality is terrible. I don't feel I need to continue. Last edited by TanukiCannon; 06-04-2008 at 02:06 PM.