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Re: Super really quick SW fantasy 3ish or maybe not so quick - Part 1.
Eh, slightly disappointing. Normally you have some good process in your stories, yet here it seems like your main focus is the sex. I know that style is your thing and I know people like that. However, you did a pretty good job with your goo story blending the process and sex together.
Again, if that isn't your goal here then I'll fuck off and find some random SM story to change into SW. Just a suggestion!
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