[Lord T Hawkeye]

Originally Posted by kooh

Nicely written. I saw it once. Very very nice. Though it sounds like the telling of a pilot episode more than a story.

It basically is yes. Glad you like.

That was the first story I`ve read in this forum, I hate reading novels. But I read it anyway.

I really enjoyed it. Its nice to have a non-hentai related theme in this forum, I liked how the characters were set out.
The poem was a fun edition for a doll tf story.
Your description on when she wore the ribbon was great.
The childish personality transformation seemed fun and I can imagine how cute a constant blush on a gloomy person.
I`m not really into hair colour changing but I loved how Megumi turned herself into a doll(small dolls)to play a prank on the policeman.


Personally if she were to play pranks it could be turning teenagers and people her age into dolls and making comments like "We can play have fun forever" and such.
But then again your story is too innocent to have something like that.

Thank you for your story Lord T Hawkeye.

You're very welcome. I'll try to do more when I can.