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Apsm · 11-22-2017

I figured you wanted a little feedback so here's my quick thoughts.

I didn't mind it even if I thought the main transformation was broken off by the banter. I did like the concept of an organisation that can change people's genders, and it seems you gave some thought on the rules and pitfalls of such an operation.

That said, the idea of a person being changed physically and mentally by re-living their life in a dream was maybe my favourite part. Really shows his growing acceptance with the changes.

11-22-2017	#2
Apsm Lurker/budding TG author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 269	Re: My first big tg story (anthro tg, sequence) I figured you wanted a little feedback so here's my quick thoughts. I didn't mind it even if I thought the main transformation was broken off by the banter. I did like the concept of an organisation that can change people's genders, and it seems you gave some thought on the rules and pitfalls of such an operation. That said, the idea of a person being changed physically and mentally by re-living their life in a dream was maybe my favourite part. Really shows his growing acceptance with the changes. __________________ -Male characters I like to see TG'd: Koizumi (Haruhi), Shinji (EVA), Keitaro (Love Hina), Satoshi (DNAngel) -Female characters I'd like to be (Update): Rei (EVA), Ami and Haruka (Sailor Moon), Nene (BGC2040), Teletha (FMP), Haruhi and Mikuru(Haruhi Suzumiya), Yourichi and Rangiku (Bleach), Riza(FMA), Lenalee (D Gray Man), Ennis (Baccano).