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Originally Posted by Captain Ash
Why should this thread be a mistake?
As long as you get valueable feedback. 
Just retry it.
This time with more background info of Mr. Price.
How does he looks like?
How did they met?
How is his character like?
etc.
Greetings
Captain Ash |
To answer your question, I was never good at writing and started feeling insecure about posting the story. It had views, but no one was saying anything about the story.
I will but don't expect anything soon. It will probably take a number of hours to write that stuff.