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Originally Posted by qzar9999
Well, I liked it. Your writing could maybe use a bit more polish, but it certainly isn't bad. Thanks for sharing! 
Y'know, this could make a decent comic script... |
Thank you for the kind words.
To be fair I was only ever a B student when it came to writing. I still have lots of trouble with grammar, spelling and verb tense.
Funny you say comic script. That's because the original idea was for a shrinking Lara Croft commission for Shrink Fan Comics. The basics of the idea are in the story I posted. But the story grew to big for a give away. So I changed it to "New Lara Croft Downsized."
I will say thank you again to the nice editor who made "New Lara Croft Downsized" better.
qzar9999 I have no problems if you want use it for shrink fan comics. Though I imagine when I finish draft 4 of this story it will be longer.