Well so far everything seems pretty nice to me. Both the character and her story as well. As for the "similarity" between her and Subi, it really is not the same. Subi has a energy that she constantly has within her body called "qi" or "chi". Qi is believed to be part of everything that exists, as in ?life force? or ?spiritual energy,? It is most often translated as ?energy flow.?
So Subi has to control her energy that she has while your character absorbs the energy from a separate object. Her heirloom. Your character will also has qi like every one of us but it is not what gives your character an expansion.
So go with whatever you think is the best. ^w^
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