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LycanDope · 04-09-2013

Password - Thank you, I appreciate that. I have to admit that I kind of wrote it fast. I have a bad habit of doing that with stories that I consider throw-away stories. I don't spend a lot of time on clean up and editing like I should. But, that aside, I appreciate the critique. Was the staggering chapters not that great a device? Should I have maybe done it differently to make it easier to read? And, as an aside, what kind of transformations do you go for? And did you have a favorite part? I always like asking just to see what catches people's eye.

@soatome101 - And thank you as well! In your eyes, I should've fleshed it out more rather than making it a string of violence and sexual encounters? Was that mostly it? Also, I'll ask the same - do you have a particular favorite part?

04-09-2013	#22
LycanDope Smutty Lady Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 620	Re: The Magic School Bus: Halloween Special Password - Thank you, I appreciate that. I have to admit that I kind of wrote it fast. I have a bad habit of doing that with stories that I consider throw-away stories. I don't spend a lot of time on clean up and editing like I should. But, that aside, I appreciate the critique. Was the staggering chapters not that great a device? Should I have maybe done it differently to make it easier to read? And, as an aside, what kind of transformations do you go for? And did you have a favorite part? I always like asking just to see what catches people's eye. @soatome101 - And thank you as well! In your eyes, I should've fleshed it out more rather than making it a string of violence and sexual encounters? Was that mostly it? Also, I'll ask the same - do you have a particular favorite part?