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Originally Posted by godleydemon
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I didn't see to many issues with the artwork. (No nipple girls! They are apparently prone to shrinking, don't feed after midnight).
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There's also a point where the girls leave their bikini on the shores and the boys take it, yet when the young girls come out they're "clothed" in the bikini. It seems like a quick censorship job here and it's the only thing that felt out of place in this story.
Though I agree with all Godley said... though I was curious why their eyesight got worse as they regressed/got smaller and kristin's got better. It's never really explained. I just assumed as Kristin became a giant her eyes were able to see "nearer" because she was bigger.
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