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Finished the 2nd draft for the 5th chapter. Yes, that is right, the 5th chapter.
The fourth and fifth chapters are connected, andI just happened to find the fifth easier to construct. The fourth, eh, that one is going to take some thinking to get it how I want it to be. I want it to "feel right"; I do not know if that makes sense. It has to flow well. The conversation, the interactions, must feel realistic. The only reason? Entirely for the last section or two. You will understand when we get there.
I need to have both chapters finished before I present them;again, this goes back to the part about them being connected. Ideally, some parts of the fourth chapter will not make sense without the fifth chapter; and some parts of the fifth chapter will not make sense without the fourth chapter. The downside; you gotta wait. The upside; you are waiting for two chapters, released simultaneously.
And after all that...
There is only one chapter left.
In other news, my art has improved marginally, but I prefer to present material that I believe is at least "decent". The day I become accustomed to decent shading... ah, that is a day I look forward to. Sometimes I think, "why bother?" But then I think, "I should give it the old college go." And so I do. Maybe some art books will help... so far, all I have had is comic books, oh, and a book on "Drawing Real People". Just started checking that out. Seems interesting.
And finally, please leave some feedback! That helps me develop as a writer.
Thanks for all the views! On our way... to 6,000~!
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