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Originally Posted by GenYun
Great ending! I was sorry to see it finish, but I guess you couldn't do it forever.
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Always glad to make you happy GenYun
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Originally Posted by thelurker
I am one of those that considered some of the elements of the story unsavory. This is by no means the author's fault, it's just that a number of our interests (read: fetishes) did not intersect.
The reason that I am saying that is to provide a context to the following:
I read the story start to finish, and as erotica goes, I consider it to be extremely well written. The story flows, the language captivates, the characters are "believable".
All in all, excellent work!
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I knew I was pushing the boundaries for my audience with this story, which raised the stakes for trying to make it worthwhile for the readers. I appreciate your going with me. Thank you for reading!