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Originally Posted by godleydemon
... the bratty younger sister had gotten to a point to where I really wanted her to get some just rewards against her. She'd pushed her luck so darn far and the older sister didn't seem like she deserved it. So I kind of wanted to see some dynamic there where the older sister got her revenge a little on the younger one and kind of put her in her place. But I want it to be in a very slow regression.
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Hey thanks for all the feedback! I realize not everybody is going to be happy with the plot, but I'm definitely listening and will consider the feedback in upcoming chapters. And I'm doing my best to try to catch the consistency errors - these are really difficult to find, and occur even in comics by the major publishers.
And don't worry, Madison, Zoe and even little brother Michael still have a lot of changes in store. If there are specific things you'd like to see let me know.