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Blackbat · 04-26-2014

Just fantastic SW action. The SW interactions were great, I especially liked the Rae & Ellendra bit near the end. I guess Rae will be returning but I like Ellendra too, well drawn, great mindset along with Rae.

Without spoiling I didn't like the Sir Winkie breaking the wall bit, to be honest it felt it confused the story along with the girls reaction, like some information was missing but I know I had already seen the buildup to it.

Trying to be constructive with the feedback, I might be a bit obscure on the 2nd paragraph there but I cannot seem to get it into words. Hope I haven't spoiled it, if so will edit asap.

04-26-2014	#5
Blackbat SW Gentleman Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: UK Posts: 541	Re: Pixie No More 3 is now available! SW, GTS, BE Just fantastic SW action. The SW interactions were great, I especially liked the Rae & Ellendra bit near the end. I guess Rae will be returning but I like Ellendra too, well drawn, great mindset along with Rae. Without spoiling I didn't like the Sir Winkie breaking the wall bit, to be honest it felt it confused the story along with the girls reaction, like some information was missing but I know I had already seen the buildup to it. Trying to be constructive with the feedback, I might be a bit obscure on the 2nd paragraph there but I cannot seem to get it into words. Hope I haven't spoiled it, if so will edit asap.