[Tiedefender]

I liked it. It has an interesting idea and runs with it. It succeeded in my opinion.

The good.
1. The story. It gets set up nicely and follows through each part in a logical manner.
2. The art had a lot of attention put into it making it detailed.
3.Has a happy ending.
4. Interesting idea of slow shrinking done well. As is her change in figure.

The bad.
1. Not really clear about how Vivica feels about Elma at the end.
2. Elma's part feels unresolved.
3. Not enough of the actual shrinking process.