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Originally Posted by frice2000
Nice addition, still as almost always in your stories wish there was more successful resistance to the corruption. Like one or two falling, but one succeeding in tossing off the mental domination aspect and showing that characters struggle against what her dual psyche would want in a more prolonged fashion would be nice. Regardless though, nice transformation and there was some nice characterization considering how short the piece was. Nice transformation scenes as well. Overall a solid addition to your growing collection of stories. Just wish the transformational aspect was less your focus then the story and characters after it, but then I'm probably in the minority on this site in asking for that.
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Thanks for the comment.
About characters resisting the corruption, I think that's a fine idea - I just don't want to use it too often. I've written several mass TF stories, and if all of them, or even most of them, always had a character or two that kept their minds and moral compass, I think that would get old after a while. I liked what I did in Return of the Queen, having a faction of "good" succubi, but I don't want to rewrite the same story with a different set of monsters.
As for TF-focused vs plot-focused stories, I like both but I realise that some people prefer one over the. Whatever. I write what I write, and I fully realise that not all of my stories will appeal to everyone.