I really liked the teasing parts.
Just one thing:
I'm not a Lara Croft fan and had no idea who this Edward Price was.
Even a quick search in google was fruitless.
So a little more introductions to the characters would be nice, because I had no idea how he looks like and how he usually behaves.
But I got the impression that he is quite a coward.
Thanks for sharing.
Greetings
Captain Ash