[whyamihere]

So just for the hell of it turned this into a collaborative saw tale, meaning if you want to make the next chapter, you can! Just have this is mind:

- There needs to be process, but not enough the main character dies of the block
- I will make the final chapter
- Have the traps be based off the reason why she is there, that shes using people lesser than her for her own personal gain
- Please don't make this a full on porn story i.e "Put yourself in her vagina to get the key"

Good idea or shit? idk heres my revised chapter 1:

Cathryn woke up with a thud to the sound of loud banging. It was pitch black and she could barely see, all she could make out was a mirror in front of her. She saw her straight brown hair, blue eyes, T-Shirt and jeans with a pair of toms on, strapped to a chair. An immediate surge of panic rushed over her body as she realized what was going on. She was the newest victim of the jigsaw killer...

Within mere moments of her realization a surge of light roared from the ceiling downwards, revealing Cathryn in the middle of what looked to be a room of an abandoned warehouse, with rust covering the walls and floor, spiders crawling through cracks, and something she hadn't seen yet, a flat screen television perfectly mounted on the wall in front of her. She knew what was going to happen as she studied Jigsaw before, and sure enough she was right. The notorious clown puppet appeared on the screen and began to speak:

"Hello Cathryn, I want to play a game... For years you've done nothing but stomp on those lesser than you, abusing desperate individuals who try to make an honest living cleaning your house or making you food. In return you've blackmailed, abused, and underpaid those people, never caring about those poorer than you, smaller than you. Well today, you will learn what it feels like to be the little guy. The question is, will you be able to handle it?..."

As he finished an x-ray of her stomach appeared on the screen, revealing a small block inside, it looked like it was about the size of a corn flake, and appeared to be in perfect condition.

"I have currently drugged you with a shrinking formula, and inside your stomach is a specialized metal that can withstand stomach acid. That block will not shrink with you, so if you don't succeed, you will be ripped from the inside out..."

Cathryn began to panic, she knows Jigsaw doesn't fuck around, but a shrinking formula? He has to be kidding! Regardless she knew she had to listen or she will miss the instructions.

"If you want to maintain your life and find the antidote, you will have to learn how it feels to be abused by someone bigger than you."

To her right she saw the wall standing there sliding downward, revealing a giant, linear machine that looked to be at least 4 yards long, it had a car crushing design with the top of the contraption connected to a chain that looked like it was barely keeping the large metal afloat, at the end was a key on top of a pedestal and behind that was a metal door, it looked similar to something you would see in a high security correctional facility.

"You must learn go in the machine and retrieve the key as the machine steps on you, just like how you step on others trying to get somewhere they need to be. I warn you Cathryn, you have about 1 hour until you will be too small to support that block, and you will be ripped from the inside out. Live or die Cathryn, make your choice..."

The TV shut off and Cathryn and felt her binds retract and free her. Cathryn started to panic and call for help, but was quickly shut off by the feeling of her clothes getting all the more loose. Making her fully realize she was indeed shrinking. Cathryn went into full on auto pilot as she rushed to the machine and leaped inside, this triggered the top part of the machine close down to the bottom very quickly, Cathryn ran as she could, realizing the machine was longer than she originally thought, she suddenly tripped on her now slightly big shoe and the wall started to crush her, she screamed as she felt her spine squeezing down on her body. Feeling every bone condense into itself and bend, her shrinking started to come in handy as it gave her room to crawl at the cost of her other shoe slipping off. The only problem is she had progressively more and more room to crawl through, she eventually got to the end and jumped out as fast as she could, her feet shrinking before being crushed. She fell on the floor panting and holding back tears of pain. She forced herself up, trying to ignore the pain, only to have her jeans sag down a bit, revealing a bit of her panties "Of all the days to not wear a belt!" she grumbled under here tears, she tightened it and grabbed the key, the machine rose back up as soon as the key was obtained and she grabbed her flattened Toms and put them back on, they were about half a size bigger but she could use them, when she walked her heel revealed itself. She hastily unlocked the door and went to the second room...


If you wanna make the second room go ahead! LK I say you do it you're good at writing :P