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Re: New eBook: "Two Birds in a Gilded Cage" M/f, f/f, F/f, etc.
So I bout this book and read it last night. Its a nice story but its process is pretty fast. So its not a gradual shrink like I liked in Short Time.
In my opinion the gift story you published was better about slowly shrinking, given volume length.
I also would have liked a few more alternate endings. The one you picked seemed out of character for the blonde. Not to give away spoilers.
Thank you for the story nonetheless.
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