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frice2000 · 11-26-2010

Pretty nice story. The transformation and mental changes were very nicely and vividly done. Also while I'm not usually a fan of mental changes and character death you wrote it quite well in regards to that. I think a slight problem with the story was you wrote it a little too tied to the series of pictures contained within rather then where the story might go otherwise limiting your options a tad. All in all though this was an impressive work thanks for sharing it.

11-26-2010	#7
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: The Clarenceville Horror: A TG Tale w/ Illustrations Pretty nice story. The transformation and mental changes were very nicely and vividly done. Also while I'm not usually a fan of mental changes and character death you wrote it quite well in regards to that. I think a slight problem with the story was you wrote it a little too tied to the series of pictures contained within rather then where the story might go otherwise limiting your options a tad. All in all though this was an impressive work thanks for sharing it.