[Tiedefender]

I would say most of this comic is decent.

I do like the hand held and measuring scenes. The size comparison at the end it really good also.

The story transitions smoothly from scene to scene. It also conveys a passage of time.

The art looks better this time around. It is also maintains size consistency better.

What I think could be improved is the pace of the story and the shrinking scenes. The passage of time seemed to fast to me. I also, didn't like how it ended.

With the shrinking I think it doesn't really show it smoothly and less like jump cuts. At least for me it needed better reference points to make it easier to show her shrinking.