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ShrinkingOne · 08-01-2018

This comic was not very interesting from a story perspective. The boyfriend is unbelievable. Art is OK but every shrinking process seemed to involve the same setup, outfit, and progression. It was repetitive and not in a good way.

Chapter 02 was OK, but this comic kinda dragged on. I am hoping this series is put on ice and that other writers are given a chqnce who might understand how to create tension or or write smarter characters who don't act like drugged-out bitches.

08-01-2018	#4
ShrinkingOne Process Fan Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 47	Re: Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics This comic was not very interesting from a story perspective. The boyfriend is unbelievable. Art is OK but every shrinking process seemed to involve the same setup, outfit, and progression. It was repetitive and not in a good way. Chapter 02 was OK, but this comic kinda dragged on. I am hoping this series is put on ice and that other writers are given a chqnce who might understand how to create tension or or write smarter characters who don't act like drugged-out bitches.