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Originally Posted by qzar9999
It's still Thursday on the West Coast. :P
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BuLL RoaR!
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Qzar9999,
That aside, I don't think I have any further doubt that you can amp up the suspense and energy level after the way you meticulously built up the start of Kim's expansive growth. Playing on the subtleties, sounds, shared expressions from one sibling to the other, you gave each creak and pop a world of it's own. When you go to the next tantalizing detail, the suspense builds up with each sentence. We know what'll happen next; keep up this style and I'll need dental surgery to fix my crooked jaw.
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