Thank you to all those who commented.
In relation to those reviews, I can certainly relate and understand.
In writing the original series, and now this, it has been a difficult question between balancing a interesting narrative and a compelling transformation. I am glad to have kept things fairly good thus far.
Though, I can appreciate that further development beyond my traditonal boundaries would be interesting and take the transformee in new directions, in their changed state too. I have been considering that for a while, and hope to maybe develop that idea further into a feasible concept.
Still, I am glad that readers have enjoyed it thus far; and I may return to Vincent/Aqua in the future, and any possible (mis)adventures they might have
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Thanks,
Alchemical Night.