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Originally Posted by gladewalker
Very descriptive and well paced. A few grammatical tidbits, but editing will catch that later. The mind games make it even better ;-)
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Thank you for the feedback.
<sigh> seems like no matter how many times I reread the thing I still manage to miss some grammar or spellig error.
More to come, but I'm working on filling in gals between what I have written so far. I will try to post part three when I have a chance.