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My first story: Jello Shots [Goo TF] [FF sex]
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Delorean7
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Re: My first story: Jello Shots [Goo TF] [FF sex]
For a first story, this is VERY good. You had an interesting set-up, a detailed TF sequence with a good lead-in and an open ending to keep people wondering what could happen next. Those are all things I enjoy in TF stories.
Keep up to good work
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