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Aahz · 06-19-2014

I enjoyed it. I think my only comments would be it seemed a bit rushed and I wish it was a bit longer.

06-19-2014	#2
Aahz Process Fan Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 76	Re: My first try at a story: Internet Shopping - Part 1 I enjoyed it. I think my only comments would be it seemed a bit rushed and I wish it was a bit longer.