Re: Hard Impact
Cherokee_Nation,
Not bad. A bit light on the clothes rippage, but a very smooth pace, nice detail with references to her slow size increase, not too short in length overall, not too big in final size of the mystery woman, nice detail with the sexual references, and well written too. Seems this Polyphema has written more than a few stories. Pass along my regards, if you would please.
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