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robclassact
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Re: New Short Story: Control

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Originally Posted by Robopengy View Post
Honestly I think this is good enough of just a story that if you cleaned up some of the language (like tits :P) you could probably submit this to a publication.
Thanks! I'd probably try to keep at least one "tits" in there. I tend to go overboard with that word, since it is awfully fun to use ;-)
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