Yes, that's a good script there! As I said in my posts above, don't feel restricted by my basic example. The more details you put into the script, the easier the script will be to make for obvious reasons! Remember guys, try to get some discussions going on about the scripts being posted, even if it's just a few lines to express why you think a script should win! TMC wants to make the clips that people here want to see, because ultimately it's a good way to sell their clips!
That's why I came up with this idea! To get all your asses hyped for the Holidays and to get TMC excited to be filming scripts the people in the community want to see! As always, if you have questions, I'm around here somewhere to answer them.
