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Originally Posted by a0040pc
I hope that this becomes a hit
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I like the story. As with "A Question of Scale" I think it ended to quickly. But with only being allotted so many pages it makes telling a story hard.
I gave some thoughts about it on the shrink-fan-comics deviant page.
To add on to improvements that I missed story wise. I think Jane's emotional transition at the end was to fast.
I do like Survival of the Smallest. I also, would like to see the whole thing finished. Trouble is waiting, it is the hardest part. So yes I like the story and I think it was drawn well.
And maybe one day when I type story I will stop putting the O in front of the R.