Re: New Story "Take It All In" by Clovis
I really like the set up, chapter by chapter release, the depth, the shows of character, all of it.
I think you are doing a wonderful job!
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Heres the clip on youtube.
Skip to 6:14 for the stuck scene
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uS4NP5Mm4DQ
link provided by smegman9
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