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Unread 02-25-2018   #14
Captain Ash
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Re: A Little too Much

For those who have never read "little by little", I'd describe why the girl are shrinking.
I agree with the others that the ending was not great, especially since I'm not a fan of vore.

A little more detail why Becky wanted to shrink Jessica that badly would be nice.
I prefer stories where characters have a motive why they want to shrink someone.
Lust? Revenge? Teaching her a lesson or just for fun?
Its these little details.
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