Re: Looking for Feedback on an Inanimate TF Story
I thought it was great, especially the dress TF.
One idea might be to transform one of the girls into a small object, a trinket of some sort something ornate and expensive looking, maybe a golden, jewel encrusted pocket-watch. However unlike with the dress TF, you could have her clothes not vanish, instead she could shrink down into them as she decreased in size while becoming the object. Then someone has to sift through her empty clothing to find 'her' within them.
Just an idea.
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