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Re: New captioned photo series/universe
The concept has promise and the animated captions are neat but the very blunt matter-of-fact writing style and mediocre grammar really knock me out of it. I'd give your captions one or two more proofreads before posting them. Maybe read them out loud to yourself at least once as you make them.
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Can't really draw well.
I can write when I find the time.
But mostly I'm here to leech! *thumbs up*
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