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Originally Posted by frice2000
These two new additions were OK...just absolutely no resistance at all is kind of blah. Should be more of a struggle, and the damn Rogues should be better fighters. They are kind of known for disarming traps and having mild psychic abilities and they should be able to kill demons far better then this. Pretty much the only reason Andariel successfully took them over was Blood Raven, the Rogue from Diablo 1, betraying them in her death and leading their army with her extreme skill. Otherwise the Rogues would've taken them down. So kind of needs some better balancing as your 'good guys' are way too weak in the context of this story. And while the transformation and fetish value is good would like to see a better story as well.
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Fair enough. No doubt I've written better stories than those two. They've been stewing in my computer's memory for several months and it just seemed like a waste if I didn't post them. The next story that I'll be posting has a bit more plot.
Thanks for the feedback. I honestly mean it.