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Unread 06-02-2009   #3
Abazaba
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Re: The Perfect Girl [WG]

Once again you found a well written and very well thought out story. I am not a huge fan of weight gain. With that said it is still a very good story. Something that if continued could get to be as long as "TUH" in both size and quality.

So once again kudos in finding such a good story. It defiantly seems as if it will continue and grow to a much larger head. Assuming the writer has interest in it and continues with it. Since the current "End" seems to pretty much be a good way to end the story.

Though makes me wonder. Based on how the story is written if the author is a girl or guy. Some of the aspects of the gain are too well described. Either way it is a good story if not a bit short.
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