Quite brilliant. I think your story is fabolously written. You can really see/read/hear that you spend a long time editing and it paid off! Nice choice of wording, good pacing, no cheap adverbs and just a cool flow. I love it. I also like that you take your time setting things up.
About Yogurcita's reading: I really don't like that name, Yogurcita. But that's taste I guess
I love how she reads though: Witty and engaging, easy to follow and a lovely sounding voice that's good on the ears. I was very very positively surprised: Thought about listening in for a minute but I was just captured and now I want more.
You can write and she can read. A nice combination
P.S. And I really get more and more converted to audiobooks. A really great way to tell a story.