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Delorean7 · 12-27-2014

For a first story, this is VERY good. You had an interesting set-up, a detailed TF sequence with a good lead-in and an open ending to keep people wondering what could happen next. Those are all things I enjoy in TF stories.

Keep up to good work

12-27-2014	#2
Delorean7 Time Traveller Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8	Re: My first story: Jello Shots [Goo TF] [FF sex] For a first story, this is VERY good. You had an interesting set-up, a detailed TF sequence with a good lead-in and an open ending to keep people wondering what could happen next. Those are all things I enjoy in TF stories. Keep up to good work