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TanukiCannon · 06-02-2008

Erm... Maybe you should start with a 5th grade spelling class.
Then check it's consistent, and also check for out of character moments (of which there were plenty) those can kind of ruin a story too.

It's just hard to take something seriously with words like "quitted".

06-02-2008	#6
TanukiCannon Lurker Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 19	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG Erm... Maybe you should start with a 5th grade spelling class. Then check it's consistent, and also check for out of character moments (of which there were plenty) those can kind of ruin a story too. It's just hard to take something seriously with words like "quitted".